Casting out the net.

After threatening to do it for several months and then making the commitment during this year's Snowflake Challenge, as of last night and at just over 23,500 words, the new fic's done. The first draft of it, at least. It's a sequel to Set Off Like Geese, so everyone's human and the demons don't matter. It's also what I've joked is the obligatory post-season five grief fic, with Dawn hanging out with Spike on warm summer nights in a small Californian town while processing her thoughts and feelings.

I need someone to look at it and tell me what I need to change to make it better. Because, like I said, first draft. So I figured, I'll ask the social networks and see what happens.