Casting out the net.

[hannah]

After threatening to do it for several months and then making the commitment during this year's Snowflake Challenge, as of last night and at just over 23,500 words, the new fic's done. The first draft of it, at least. It's a sequel to Set Off Like Geese, so everyone's human and the demons don't matter. It's also what I've joked is the obligatory post-season five grief fic, with Dawn hanging out with Spike on warm summer nights in a small Californian town while processing her thoughts and feelings.

I need someone to look at it and tell me what I need to change to make it better. Because, like I said, first draft. So I figured, I'll ask the social networks and see what happens.

Comments

[singedsun]

Congrats on finishing something new!

[hannah]

Thank you!

[flamingsword]

Gimme a day to get through my current backlog, and I will totes beta, if it is still unbetaed.

[hannah]

Is this offer still open?

[flamingsword]

Indeed! It may take me a few days, but i can do it. Do I need to do background reading beyond the first fic? Or just that?

[hannah]

There's very little from the first fic that carries over - just the general sense that this is a world without demons from other dimensions and the only vampires are small South American bats. About the only carryover is in how certain people know each other, and that this version of Wesley is autistic.