Prayers and proclamations.

I've now finished the first pass of edits on my current WIP - mostly filling in the parts where all I had was "and then they went to the place and did the stuff and talked about the thing" with some structural tinkering. Of course, I've just realized I need another section in the middle of things to keep one character's emotional development from falling off the page, which I might get to tomorrow.

I've also got my beta-reader's structural notes to look at, and get to the comma-culling. Also deciding on chapter titles. And also the segments to all but two chapters that are meant to echo the show's fantasy sequences to illuminate characters' inner lives. Which might come Saturday.

Which is to say, the horizon looms closer to where I can see it with binoculars instead of a telescope.