Brand new coats.

[hannah]

There's a particular kind of annoyance at coming back to a story after weeks away from it and seeing that there's good stuff there, and also wondering if a POV shift is what's needed. Again. Another pivot from first to third, same as my last large original project. It's only 12,000 words in, and maybe it'll be what the story needs to move forward.

I'll see about another night or two with the words I've got, then

Anyone want to give it a read? It's about a robot who runs away from home and does his best to build a life among humans.

Comments

[singedsun]

I find that in longer pieces I always struggle with a shift from past to present or vice versa. But I've done that first to third too, it can be a pain to walk back too. Good luck.