First, I love the note so much. It is lovely and I hope it reaches him.
As to your question:
1) Both formulations are set up for a yes/no answer to your 1st question right now ("did it ..."). If that's what you want, that's great. But if you were hoping for a longer answer, I would suggest something more like: "I would like to ask about your film 'A Bread Factory,' which to me felt like a theatre production [because of reasons]. What were your intents with those artistic choices?"
2) He might only answer 1 out of your 3 questions (did it feel that way/what drew you/do you have plans), so I would make sure to put your favorite question first to make sure it gets answered.
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As to your question:
1) Both formulations are set up for a yes/no answer to your 1st question right now ("did it ..."). If that's what you want, that's great. But if you were hoping for a longer answer, I would suggest something more like: "I would like to ask about your film 'A Bread Factory,' which to me felt like a theatre production [because of reasons]. What were your intents with those artistic choices?"
2) He might only answer 1 out of your 3 questions (did it feel that way/what drew you/do you have plans), so I would make sure to put your favorite question first to make sure it gets answered.